Draft an honest report comment in your teacher voice

Draft an honest report comment in your teacher voice

Term 3 report season is landing again. Every teacher on your corridor is about to write the same paragraph fifty times with different names dropped in, and every parent on your mailing list is about to skim fifty of them and delete the email. The failure mode is not laziness. It is time. A properly written report comment (a specific evidenced strength, a specific next step, in the child's actual voice for that subject this semester) takes fifteen focused minutes if you sit down cold, and most of us do not have fifteen focused minutes fifty times over. So we default to the Term 1 boilerplate with the verbs swapped, and the whole exercise quietly loses its point. This prompt does not write the comment for you. It sits alongside you, holds the rubric data and your rough notes, and returns a first draft honest enough that you spend your fifteen minutes editing rather than staring.

The prompt

You are helping me draft a report comment for one student, for one subject, for one reporting cycle at an Australian [PRIMARY / SECONDARY / VCE] school. The comment will appear in the student's official school report, seen by the student, the family, potentially a future teacher, and (for senior years) potentially a tertiary admissions officer. It has to be defensible on that basis, and it has to sound like me.

You are working in the tradition that a good report comment is SPECIFIC, EVIDENCED and ACTIONABLE. Specific to what THIS student did THIS semester. Evidenced by the actual work in front of me. Actionable in one clear next step for the semester ahead. It is not a paragraph of generic praise, not a character reference, not a school-wide template with the name changed.

CONTEXT I WILL PROVIDE

- Year level and subject: [YEAR LEVEL AND SUBJECT, e.g. Year 8 English]
- Student first name only (I will strip surname before pasting): [FIRST NAME]
- Pronouns to use in the comment: [she/her, he/him, they/them]
- Reporting cycle: [SEMESTER 1 / SEMESTER 2 / MID-SEMESTER PROGRESS CHECK]
- Grade or band the student sits at overall this cycle: [e.g. B, or "at standard", or 65 percent, or "achieving expected level"]
- Character or word limit set by my school for the comment: [e.g. 500 characters including spaces, or 90 words, or "no strict limit but house style is 3 to 4 sentences"]
- School house-style requirements, if any: [OPTIONAL, e.g. "must include one strength and one area for growth", or "must reference at least one specific task", or "third person, no first person"]

TASK DATA (this is the evidence base)

Paste in the actual pieces of work or task results from this semester that the comment should draw on. Do NOT paraphrase. If the score is 14/20, say 14/20. If the comment on the rubric was "quote integration weak", say that. The specificity of the comment depends on the specificity of what I paste here.

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[PASTE: 3 to 6 lines summarising the tasks this semester. For each: task name, grade or mark, one line of what the rubric or your notes said about this student's performance on it.]
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MY ROUGH NOTES ON THIS STUDENT THIS SEMESTER

Whatever you would say out loud to a colleague in the staffroom about this kid, unedited. Half sentences fine. Include the honest read, not the report-safe version. I will translate.

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[PASTE ROUGH NOTES. IF YOU DO NOT HAVE NOTES, WRITE THREE LINES NOW BEFORE RUNNING THE PROMPT. THE COMMENT WILL BE GENERIC IF YOU SKIP THIS.]
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WHAT I NEED YOU TO PRODUCE

A single draft report comment, in three parts, flowing as one short paragraph (not headings, not bullets). In this order:

1. THE SPECIFIC STRENGTH
One or two sentences. Name what this student can do NOW that a reader can point to in the task data I gave you. Not "shows understanding of key concepts". Instead: "Can build a paragraph around a topic sentence, quote from the text, and return to the claim in a closing line, as seen in the second body paragraph of her Of Mice and Men response."

2. THE ONE NEXT STEP
One or two sentences. Name the ONE specific move that would lift this student's work in the semester ahead. Not "continue developing analytical skills". Instead: "The next move is to add a sentence after each quote naming HOW the writer's word choice creates the effect, so the analysis explains rather than describes."

3. THE CONTEXT LINE (optional, only if the rough notes support it)
One sentence, only if there is something the family genuinely needs to know that a strength and a next step have not already said. A named contribution to the class, a documented absence pattern that affected task completion, a genuine shift across the semester. Do NOT invent one to round the comment out. If there is nothing, stop after the next step.

RULES

- Australian English throughout. Realise, colour, behaviour, analyse. Year 8, not 8th grade.
- No em-dashes and no en-dashes anywhere. Commas, full stops, parentheses, semicolons only. Regular hyphens in compound words are fine.
- Third person unless my house style says otherwise. Use the student's first name in sentence one, then pronouns.
- Match the character or word limit I gave you. Do not exceed it. If the honest comment does not fit, cut the context line, not the next step.
- BANNED PHRASES: "shows pleasing progress", "continues to develop", "is encouraged to", "consistently demonstrates", "a pleasure to teach", "on a learning journey", "grasps key concepts", "growth mindset", "excellent effort", "solid work ethic", "positive contribution to the classroom", "is a valued member of the class", "should be commended". If your first draft contains any of these, rewrite it before returning.
- BANNED VERDICTS: "outstanding", "excellent", "exceptional" unless the task data actually places this student in the top band. If they sit at B or "at standard", the comment must say so honestly. A B-band comment is not a failure; a B-band comment dressed as an A-band comment is.
- BANNED CHARACTER VERDICTS: "disrespectful", "defiant", "disruptive", "lazy", "unmotivated", "attention-seeking". If my rough notes contain one, translate it into the specific behaviour I observed and its effect on the work.
- NO DIAGNOSIS. Do not attribute performance to ADHD, autism, home life, EAL status, or any other cause, even if likely. If a learning plan is relevant, name the accommodation the student uses in class, not the diagnosis.
- NO PREDICTION. Do not write what the student "will" achieve next semester. The comment describes this semester and names one next step. The next semester belongs in the next report.
- NO PADDING. If the honest comment is three sentences and the character limit permits five, the honest comment is three sentences. Do not stretch to fill space.

Then, in a SEPARATE block below the comment, and clearly labelled "FOR MY EYES ONLY, DO NOT PASTE INTO THE REPORT":

- One sentence naming any claim in the comment that a parent could read a different way than I intended, and how to tighten it.
- One sentence flagging whether the strength and the next step are consistent with the grade the student received. A B-band grade paired with an A-band strength is a comment that will get me an email.
- One sentence on whether this comment could apply to any other student in the class. If yes, it is too generic. Name the one detail to add to make it unmistakably about this student.

If any of the following are true, STOP and tell me before writing:
- The task data I pasted contains fewer than two actual tasks. Ask me to add more evidence before the comment can be defended.
- The rough notes contradict the grade (rough notes describe a struggling student, grade is A). Ask me which is right before you draft.
- The rough notes contain a wellbeing, safeguarding or child-protection reference. Tell me that content does not belong in a report comment and belongs in the wellbeing referral pathway instead.

What it does well

The forcing constraints do the work. Banning "shows pleasing progress" and "continues to develop" is what stops the first draft sounding like every other Semester 2 report on your corridor. Requiring the strength to be quotable from the task data (not "shows understanding" but "can build a paragraph around a topic sentence, as seen in her second body paragraph") is what makes the comment survive the parent skim. And the "for my eyes only" block is the piece that earns its keep: it flags the sentence a parent will read differently than you meant it, before you paste and send, not after they reply asking what you meant.

Where it falls over

Two honest limits. The prompt is only as good as the task data and rough notes you paste. If you feed it "did fine, seemed engaged" as your notes, you will get "engaged and did fine" back in more words. The three lines of rough notes are the non-negotiable step. Second, this is a per-student prompt, not a batch tool. You can chain it across a class list by pasting each student's block in turn, but the model will drift toward a house voice by student twelve and you will be re-editing comments to sound like yourself again. Run it in stretches of eight, take a break, and cross-check that comment nine does not accidentally read like comment two.

Try it like this

For a Year 8 English semester report at a Victorian government school: paste your three tracked-assessment marks, the rubric rows the student sat at, and three lines of what you would say to the year-level coordinator. You will get a comment that names what she can actually do now (topic sentence, quote, return to claim), the one move to work on next (explaining the quote), and no filler.

For a VCE Unit 3 mid-cycle progress check: paste the SAC scores, the study-design outcome codes, and your read on where the student sits going into the SAC 2. The comment lands where the student is against the outcome, not where the student is against the class median, which is the version the family and the tutor both need.

For a primary generalist writing across five subjects for one child: run the prompt five times, once per subject, and keep the first sentence of each ("in Maths this semester, Sam has..."), not the frame. Five short, subject-specific comments beat one long paragraph that tries to cover everything and lands nowhere.

If you only have five minutes tonight: skip the rough notes, paste the task data, and ask the prompt for the strength sentence only. That is the sentence you are going to rewrite regardless, and it is the sentence the family reads first.

Never paste the first draft straight into the reporting system unread. It exists to get you off the blank page, not to sign your name to.